Our Final film idea

 

Script

Here is a complete draft of our thriller film opening. The script includes the final agreed upon title of our thriller film 'Vindictive'; a title we believe conveys the nature of the complete film and is effective dramatically as it keeps the audience pondering how exactly the theme of vengeance relates to opening as they watch the video.

Vindictive Script

Storyboard

 

Here is our thriller opening storyboard, allowing us and any other interested to somewhat visualise what the thriller opening video will look like.

Prop List

Here is a list of the props that we plan to use in our thriller opening video, we may decide to not use some of these in our final production depending on the effectiveness we believe they will have when using them and availability of objects:

• Gun replicas: Will be used in Scene 4; by the alleged 'terrorists' in a gun exchange and by Ryan as he prepares to face the criminals.

• Bag: Will be used in Scene 4 during the gun exchange as a means of carrying the contraband.

• Phones: Will be used by Ryan in Scene 1 as he talks to Yasser when leaving his deceased wife's grave, By Yasser when contacting the 'terrorists' in Scene 3 and by Ryan in Scene 4 as he makes his journey to the abandoned estate location.

• Document folder(s): Will be used in Scene 2 by Yasser when presenting the fabricated documents by him designed to deceit Ryan's character.

• Formal suits: Will be used by Yasser and Ryan in all scene's they are present in order to present them in the formal image we wish to convey.

• Flowers: Will be used in Scene 1, when Ryan shows his respect by placing the flowers on his deceased wife's grave.

• Middle eastern traditional clothing and scarf's: Traditional Arabian clothing will be worn by Martin and Halim in the stereotypical portrayal of Muslim extremists designed by the agency Ryan used to work for to fool him, in this trap.

Antagonist Comparison

Our thriller opening consists of a protagonist, an ex-cop and antagonists in the form of a whole organisation, which he believes is a terrorist organisation, but is in fact the agency he used to work for.

This is similar to the film Taken as in the film the protagonist is forced to face a criminal organisation in order to protect a loved one, knowing very little about them and are outnumbered by this organisation.

They have committed a grave crime and have made him an enemy as a result, when discovering he is after them they attempt to kill him.

Both adults have a particular developed set of abilities which allow them to remain alive and achieve their mission and this makes them a threat to their enimies. They also both have a strong motivation behind their mission concerning a loved one.


A notable difference between the two is the fact that the antagonists in Taken have something belonging to the protagonist that they do not want to lose. In our thriller this is not the case. Therefore the antagonists in our film are in a more powerful position because they have nothing to lose unlike the antagonists in Taken.

Protagonist Comparison

Our thriller features a protagonist similar to many films but a very notable character that he can be compared to is 'Bryan Mills' who is played by Liam Neeson in the film 'Taken'. The reason he is very similar to our character is because he is pursuing a similar objective to the protagonist we have created ( His family are in jeopardy therefore he seeks to solve all issues and take revenge on the people responsible  However, he is not exactly the same as our protagonist due to the fact that he is mainly used as an action character yet the role we have created is not centred around action nearly as much as the role played by Liam Neeson in Taken. Furthermore in Taken, Mills solves all of his problems fully through his action, we have included many different ways in which our character aims to resolve his issues. For example, the sources he has that he can use to gather information which he manipulates greatly to aid him on his quest. Another difference between the two is the fact that in Taken Liam Neeson is chasing his enemies as they are in the position of power and have something that he needs however in our opening the antagonists are not in any position of power, the protagonist just wants to take revenge and is willing to do a lot to get it. Therefore throughout Taken he is trying to save his family whereas our protagonist is only out to kill.

Equipment

 

 

 

Sony HD Handycam - This camera is what we will use to film and it shoots at 25 frames per second therefore it creates a visible smoothness when we record which will benefit our opening. Also it has a 12x zoom which can be beneficial as there is potential for us to use these features throughout our shoot.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Tripod - We will be using a basic tripod throughout our shoot which will provide us with stable shots which we will need for any conversations or monologues and can also provide a very smooth pan effect which will be beneficial in various scenes throughout our opening.

 

 

 

Microphone - We will be using a microphone to record any speech or sound vital to the opening as it provides clear sound with no interventions from any other source of sound. This is beneficial especially because when filming with the camera it is likely that unwanted sounds will be present therefore we have our microphone to rely on.

By Ryan Dowley