The edited version of the script; with character names and the removal of the Office Scenes (Scenes 2 and 3) from the film opening, however breaking down the necessary information from the scenes in the form of voice over/phone call conversations which play during the first scene.
This was a decision made because we believed that three locations and the extent of dialogue we had would not be appropriate in creating the sense of mystery we hoped to create and may have perhaps caused it to resemble a trailer. Furthermore, we also agreed that compressing the information we wanted in the form of phone calls over the first scene would seem more professional and creative than what we had originally planed.
Another change made was to open the final scene with the protagonist exiting a garage opposite the estate we discovered when looking around it, rather than walking on a pavement somewhere more distant and a fade into him walking towards the estate when he is nearer. This was done not only because it is time effective but also as it would be more piratical for the character, therefore suits the characteristics of a highly skilled and intelligent ex-agent. Furthermore, this also creates the illusion that he had arrived on a vehicle, which also suits the age and mobile lifestyle the character would have.
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